The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country from January 2

1 注意问题：

时态问题，易用一般现在时

2 篇章结构：

第一段 叙述现象

第二段 反对者的意见，理由

第三段 赞成者的意见以及理由

第四段 你的意见 理由

3 出现问题

基本句子写不对

Agree to/with banning smoking

there be 句型

there are many people had been effected by second hand smoke

吸烟有害健康

smoking is harmful to /does harm to your healthy

吸烟是自己的事情与别人无关。

Smoking is no other than personal matter

Affect effect

Suggest sb. To do It is become more and more by harm of smoking Smoking banned decision I want all the people can agree with this decision

基本语法错误

Be against 、for 代词的选择 The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country from January 2011. Even though Smoking is very popular among people in China, different people have different ideas upon it.

Some of the smokers believe that smoking can ease their nerves and relieve their pressure. And smoking is personal and it has nothing to do with

others. what is more, Smoking will not only make you feel better but help you think especially when you are writing. They also hold the view that smokers seem to have an easy manner. Above all, Smoking can increase tax for our country.

Some people against smoking think that smoking is a bad habit, which can cause a lot of diseases. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires. Smoking is harmful and it is not only bad for smokers themselves, but also bad for non-smokers.

Therefore, I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them.