专题21 书面表达
考点3 咨询建议类
（一）【2019 •哈尔滨市】
假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新学校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。
写作要点：
1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。2. 介绍学校：(1) 课程有趣；(2) 有多名外教；(3) 活动丰富。
3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4. 至少80词。Dear new friends,
It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文，内容是关于学校生活的。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象提出自己的建议。不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。在写作过程中，要注意句与句段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。【参考范文】Dear new friends,
It's my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am good at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like.
Now you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. It's also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class.I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and help each other.
Best wishes!
Yours,Li Ping
（二）【2019 •江苏省苏州市】
假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历．用英语回信开导他。
To：subua@china.comFrom：nathan.australia.com
Subjects： Learning from mistakesDear Su Hue,
I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me?
Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?Can you tell me one of your mistakes?How did you deal with your problem?What have you learned from the mistake? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Nathan
注意：
l. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量；2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my experience can help you out.Best wishes
Su Hua
【写作思路】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量
使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。【参考范文】
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.Best wishes.
Su Hua
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和It's true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you
out.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
（三）【2019 •浙江省衢州市】
假设你是Li Ming，
以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。
要求：1. 考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件； 2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息； 3. 词数：90~100。
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【写作思路】
本题是书信作文。假设你是Li Ming，
以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。注意电子邮件格式。时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据Seb的电子邮
件，列出提纲。表达要条理清楚，语言规范。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。【参考范文】
From: LiMingTo: Seb
Subject: Learning Chinese in QuzhouHi, Seb,
I’m so glad that you’ll come to live in my city.
To improve Your Chinese quickly. You can go and take a course in a Chinese Language School. It can always help you to speak better and learn more.
Then, try to experience life here in Quzhou. Of course. I’ll take you around Quzhou. We can visit the Confucius Temple. It’s the best way to understand our culture. And you can practice speaking Chinese at the same time. It’s very helpful.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,Li Ming
【名师点评】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
（四）【2019 •山东省济宁市】
假如你是Wang Hong, 你的美国笔友Kevin下学期将作为名交换生来你们学校。下面是他发给你的一封e-mail.请根据邮件内容给予恰当的回复。
注意:
1.文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息.2.100词左右(开头,结尾已给出,不计人总词数)。Dear Wang Hong,
How are you doing?
You might not believe it, but I’m going to your school as one of five exchange students next term. And I’m so excited! However, I’m worried about communicating with the teachers and students. As you know, I can speak only a little Chinese. What should I do? Besides, I want to learn to play pin-pong. Can you find a good player to help me? If you can, tell me something about him or her.
Looking forward to your reply Best wishes!
Yours,Kevin
参考词语talk in English, help sb. with, be friendly and helpful, practice... with, play well, win a good prize.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意不同的时态和人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】Dear Kevin
I’m glad to hear from you. You said you were worried about communicating with the teachers and students because you could speak only a little Chinese. You don’t be worried about it. You can talk with them in English. They can also help you with Chinese. They are very friendly and helpful. You also said you wanted to learn to play ping-pong. You can practice it with Li Lei. He is my best friend. He plays it very well. He won a good prize last week. He is ready to do others. With his help, you will be good at it.
Welcome to our school.Best wishes.
YoursWang Hong
（五）【2019 •广安市】
当前，许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机(smart
phones)。针对这一现象，学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。
1.花大量时间玩游戏，上课睡觉，不按时完成作业。
活动内容
2.伤害眼睛，不利健康。1.远离智能手机，认真学习。
建议
2.多花时间与家人、朋友交流。
3.积极参加各种活动，如打篮球、唱歌……
要求：1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称； 3. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。
参考词汇：eyesight(视力)；disadvantage(不利条件)；keep away from(远离)；take an active part in(积极参加)Girls and boys,
With the develop of the Internet, many students have smart phones. _________________________________
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That's all Thank you!
【写作思路】
本文是一篇给材料作文。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。【参考范文】
Girls and boys,
With the development of the Internet, many students have smart phones. The students often spend so much time in playing games with them that they feel very tired. Someone doesn’t finish their homework on time. Someone even sleeps in class. Besides, smart phones do harm to our health, some students’ eyesight is becoming poorer and poorer.
To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should make some changes.First, we should keep away from smart phones and work hard.
Second, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on.
Third, take an active part in all kinds of activities, such as playing basketball, singing songs.That’s all. Thank you!
【名师点评】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
（六）【2019 •湖南长沙】
假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。
要求：
（1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料的书信作文。假如你是李华，就输球事件安慰Henry，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。人称为第二人称，时态以一般现在时为主。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，补充两
条个人的观点并提出建议。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。【参考范文】Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.
You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.
As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.
Best wishes!
Yours,Li Hua
【名师点评】
高分句型一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的是你应该从比赛中吸取教训，也要从错误中吸取教训。What matters is
that重要的是，that引导的是表语从句。as well as常用来连接两个并列的成分，作“也，还”讲。
高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可以保证你会不遗余力地提高你的技能。that引导的是宾语从句，spare no efforts to do sth.不遗余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one. 如果大家齐心协力，你们一定会赢得下一场比赛。此句是if引导的条件状语从句；be sure to do sth.必定做某事。
（七）【2019 •江苏省南京市】
假如你是李华，在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议．请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件．
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing． The app is to help learners explore ideas， organize them and write them down． Your ideas are needed！Here' s what to do：
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative！Please let us know：
● What's the name of the app？● What problem does the app solve？● What does the app do？
Contact us at appdesign@Britech com注意:
1．内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2．词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）；
3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for designing an app for English writing．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇根据英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for doing an APP for English writing． I'd like to share my ideas here． Could its name be \"right made easy\"？【APP的名字】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．【高分句型一】We don't know how to organize ideas，use proper words，and so on． I hope it can solve these problems．【APP要解决的问题】
Here is my advice on what the APP does． First， it should provide some reading materials． The more we read， the better we write． Second． The APP should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills． Third， there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions．【APP能做什么】
I hope my advice is worth taking．【高分句型二】【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．我们中的许多人写作困难．have difficulty doing干某事有困难．【高分句型二】
I hope my advice is worth taking． 我希望我的建议值得采纳．be worth doing 值得干某事．
（八）【2019 •湖南省衡阳市】
根据一项新的调查，学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师，对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育，请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题，提出你的建议。
要求：
1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。2. 书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80.
参考词汇： cover v. 遮盖 take the lift 乘坐电梯 exit n. 出口 towel n. 毛巾shut off 切断
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