2012天津中考英语作文
【篇一：2012年天津_中考_英语_范文】
2012年天津中考英语
书面表达 （本大题共15分）
假如你有两位同学——芳芳和明明，参加了上个星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛，他们的不同表现使你深有感触。请你根据下列表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文。
参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 english speech contest
要求： 1. 词数：80~100个。
2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
范文：
last tuesday fangfang and mingming entered the english speech contest in our school. what they did made me think deeply.
before the contest, fangfang thought she was good at english and needn’t work hard, so she spent a lot of time choosing fashionable clothes before the
contest. as a result, she didn’t prepare well. because of that, she was nervous, and didn’t complete the speech.
on the contrary, mingming worked hard. he learnt from others. even if he got hurt two days before the contest, he never gave up. in the end, he performed very well.
i think i should learn from mingming. no matter what you have got, one should
work hard and improve oneself, as the old saying goes, “practice makes perfect.”
【篇二：2012年天津市中考英语满分作文1】
2012年天津市中考英语满分作文
天津市中考英语作文题目:
假如你有两位同学——芳芳和明明,参加了上个星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛,他们的不同表现使你深有感触.请你根据下列表格中的内容提示写一篇英文短文.
参考词汇:英语演讲比赛 english speech contest 注意：1.词数：80——100个；
2.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
last tuesday fangfang and mingming entered the english speech contest in our school. what they did made me think deeply.
满分作文示例1
last tuesday fangfang and mingming entered the english speech contest in our school. what they did made me think deeply.
before the contest, fangfang thought that her english was very good and she didn’t need to work hard. so she spent a lot of time selecting beautiful clothes for attending the english speech contest. meanwhile, mingming studied hard and went to others for advice when meeting problems. although his legs were hurt two days before the contest, he didn’t give up.
during the contest, because of being nervous and poorly prepared for it, fangfang didn’t finish the speech. mingming did well.
no pains, no gains. his hard work made a good result. we should learn from mingming.
【篇三：天津中考英语作文全攻略】
天津中考英语作文全攻略
书面表达是天津中考英语每年的必考项，虽然只有15分的分值，但对于不同层次的学生而言，这15分是最能拉开差距的一项。
纵览天津市近三年中考，从08年“庆祝母亲节”，到09年的“读好书，促成长”，再到10年的“为有烦恼的朋友写回信”，似乎每一年的考题都在尽可能的贴近学生的日常学习和生活。近三年的中考书面表达，都是以表格的形式给出相应的信息，要求考生通过对信息的理解和整合，写成自己的文章，这里考察考生如下能力：
1.获取信息的能力。对于同一个表格，不同的孩子能够解读出的内容不尽相同，可放到考试中，每一个解读出的信息都是相应的给分点，因此读题审题很重要。大到整个题目意义，小到每一个细节，都是给分点，因此信息的获取一定要全面。
2.整合信息的能力。获取了各种知识点后，考生是否能够将这些信息加以自己的理解，合理的整合到一起，是决定这篇作文成绩的关键因素。整合信息的过程中要注意：按照一定的顺序进行整理。例如08年的“庆祝母亲节”，需要考生按照事件发展的顺序，从时间、地点、人物，到事情的详细经过和结果，如果反其道而行之，一定是不可以的。再如09年的“读好书、促成长”，要按照活动的原因、目的、意义、经过、结果、自身感受的顺序行文，如果顺序颠倒，会显得很别扭。
3.表达信息的能力。其实说白了，这就是要求考生按照符合与法规定的句子，把这些整合好的信息完整无误的表达出来，句子的结构是否齐全，同一个句子的表达是否可以借助复合句，文章的开头结尾是否呼应、是否点题等，都是决定这篇文章最后分数档的关键因素。想想看，如果在开头处没有直入主题，并且写了个有语法错误的句子，再加上书写不是很清楚，这篇作文的成绩大家就可想而知了。
下面，我们逐一来看看近三年的考题以及范文，注意红体字部分的表达方式，在考试中，这些都是“闪光点”，是可以让我们获得高分的地方。
先来看08年的考题
today is mother’s day. i love mother so much that i’ve done many things for her.
in the morning i bought many flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase. in the afternoon i went to the market to buy vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family. after supper, i gave mother the card that i made myself and said “happy mother’s day” to her. then i told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork. i also promised to help her do some housework from today on. hearing the words, mother was moved to tears.
today is a special day, warm and meaningful.
【点评】本篇文章最大的亮点在于作者非常注重细节的描述，可以看出，所有的提示以及要点在文章中都以各种形式为我们展示了出来，这样的文章怎么可能不得高分呢？
【提示】中考作文切记三点：1.要点全；2.表达准确无误；3.书写工整并有适当的闪光句型
09年考题
my dear friends,
reading is very important in our life. we can gain knowledge through reading. it can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. our study can be improved if we read more books. reading also helps us grow as a person.
however, it’s a great pity that many activities such as listening to music, watching tv and going online take up much of our reading time. so here, i would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. it will do us good! let’s start reading now!
【点评】本篇文章运用了多种变换句型，例如not only...but also,its a great pity that..., suggest that sb. should do sth等，同时文章还有一大亮点，那就是运用了被动语态。想想，当你去看一篇文章都是在说“谁做了什么”的时候，突然巧妙地运用了一个被动语态，这是多么让人兴奋地一个句子啊！
【提示】长句与短句、简单句与复合句、主动与被动的结合，会使文章大放光彩！
2010年考题
dear steve,
i’ve leaned your problem. i think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas. try to talk with your classmates at break. if you want to get on well with your classmates, don’t forget to say hello when you meet them. being friendly and helpful is also very important. you need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meeting, football games
and singing competitions. i’m sure you will soon be among friends.
best wished
diana
【点评】本篇着重考查对于表建议句型的表达，我们不难发现，这篇范文中每个句子都在题建议，而作者的每一次建议都运用了不同表达方式与技巧，例如：i think,try to do, dont forget to do, ...is very important, you need to...，文章最后还给读者以信心的鼓励 im sure you will...
【提示】多多变换对于同一种意义的不同表达方式会使文章更加有活力！
【训练方法】
1.
记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。
2.
练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用
循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。
3.
写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在15分钟内写出80个词的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。
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