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2024届高考英语读后续写优秀范文10篇(含范文)

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英语读后续写优秀范文10篇

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I was 8 years old. I had little need of luggage. But something about that old leather suitcase appealed to my imagination. In fact, I found it in my grandmother's attic. Grams didn't object, and so the suitcase came to live beneath my bed. I didn't use the old suitcase before that day.

It was a cloudy fall morning in our North Carolina town, and a fine mist wet the fallen leaves. I was angry. My mother had slighted me somehow, though now I have no idea what stirred up my anger. I was upset, and I wanted to make her pay. I wanted to give her a taste of what life would be like without me.

I would run away. “Goodbye, Mom.”

I stood outside the kitchen door, suitcase grabbed firmly in hand. I wore my red overcoat and gray ski cap, looking the part. “Goodbye, Mom,” I repeated twice more to make sure she'd heard.

At last, Mom appeared, wiping her hands on a dish towel. She looked at me quickly. I lifted the suitcase a little just to make sure she didn't miss it. “I'm leaving,” I said.

I'd rehearsed for the expected reaction. The plan was to let her feel guilty and beg for a minute or two and then I would give in after I was sure of her regret. “Did you pack a lunch?”

Mom's question knocked me off balance. Where were the tears? The begging? \"I'm leaving,\" I said. \"I'm running away. For... ever.\" I repeated, sure it would change her mind. Instead, she smiled.

“Well, would you like me to fix you something? A sandwich? A bag of chips? I just made chocolate chip cookies.”

“I'm really going,\" I said. “I can see that.”

“Maybe a cookie.” And then, “All right, I'm off” The misty rain lent drama to my journey.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

As I stepped onto the front walk(步道), fresh—baked chocolate chip cookie was put in my coat pocket. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I bite the cookie and thought that my mother deserved one last chance to stop me, so a moment later, I was back in the doorway of my home.

【范文背诵】

As I stepped onto the front walk(步道), fresh-baked chocolate chip cookie was put in my coat pocket. I looked back at our big yellow house. I stared at the front door, waiting for it to fling open. I watched the lace curtains in the living room window for movement. My mother didn't show up. So I had no choice but to continue. I got to the sidewalk and took a right, moving slowly up the avenue. I stopped at the

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corner and looked back at our house. I had no idea what would come next. Feeling the cookie that my mother had given me, I hesitated.

I bite the cookie and thought that my mother deserved one last chance to stop me, so a moment later, I was back in the doorway of my home. I peeked in. My mother was on the couch, positioned just right for a view out a large window. I stepped into the room, still holding that suitcase. \"I'm happy you're home,” she said. She'd been crying. She managed a smile when I stepped over to her. My anger, disappointment and heartbreak faded away. I knew she loved me. I slowly opened the suitcase so she could see what I had packed for my runaway journey: Nothing. It was empty. I often recall the lesson of that day: My mother loved me enough to let me find my own way back home.

【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者八岁时打算离家出左,想让母亲尝尝没有自己的生活会是什么样子。临走时母亲坚持让作者带上刚烤好的饼干当午餐,最后作者出门后摸着妈妈的饼干还是选择回家了。 【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“当我走到前面的走道上时,我的外套口袋里放着刚烤好的巧克力曲奇。”可知,第一段可描写作者出门后的内心感受和行为。

②由第二段首句内容“我咬了一口饼干,觉得我妈妈应该有最后一次机会来阻止我,所以过了一会儿,我又回到了家门口。”可知,第二段可描写作者回到家后看到的景象和明白的道理。

2.续写线索:作者走到走道上——作者在拐角停下来——作者咬了一口饼干——作者回到家里——作者明白母亲的爱——作者感悟 2

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I couldn’t stop thinking about watermelons. I’d saved all y money to buy one. One giant, juicy wonderful watermelon all for me. I was going to eat it all up, for the seeds.

At the store I searched carefully, looking for the biggest, juiciest, and most wonderful one I could find. There it was. I picked up my dream watermelon and put it on the floor. I rolled my treasure to the checkout line and waited for the cashier to weigh. Fifteen pounds!

After paying,I rolled it out the door , then along the sidewalk, three blocks to my house. Sweat fell in drops from my forehead onto the watermelon. in drops from my forehead onto the watermelon. "Lucy! What are you doing with that watermelon?\" Mom asked in surprise.

“I saved up my money and bought it at the grocery store. I’m going to eating it all by myself.” Mom frowned,and warned, “You'll get sick.”

"Please,” I begged. “I've been saving all my money for it.”

Mom thought for a while, and then smiled meaningfully as if she knew something.She asked me to roll my giant,juicy,wonderful watermelon out the back door to our picnic table in the yard. She brought out a knife and some paper plates. My sister followed her.“Oh,watermelon,\"she exclaimed with joy. “I want some.”

“Sorry,”I told her. “I'm going to eat it all by myself.”“Mom!” she cried,deep disappointment in her eyes. “Your sister saved her money and bought it herself. She decides what to do with it.”

My brother came out next.“Watermelon! Can I have some?” he asked eagerly.“No way,\"I refused him

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without hesitation. “I'm going to eat it all by myself.” “Mom!” my brother protested loudly. “It's your sister's watermelon. She decides.”

“You can't eat that all by yourself,\" he challenged. “Yes,I can!”I declared firmly.

My father came out. “Oh,watermelon!” he said, seeing it. "Don't even ask,”said my brother. “She won't share,” my sister added.

Mom cut the watermelon into eight pieces in total.I reached for my first piece and took a bite.Red juice ran down my chin(下巴). 注意:

2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 1.续写词数应为150左右; Para 1:

The four of them stood together around he picnic table,Watching me.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para 2: Suddenly felt I was greedy as I was the only one having fun.

【范文背诵】 Possible version 1:

The four of them stood together around the picnic table, watching me. Regardless of their eager look and watering mouth, I started taking another piece of watermelon. Face messed up with red juice and hands sticky , I spit out the black seeds carefreely, white shirt spotted with red marks. “I want some, I want some…”my brother was constantly begging. However, father sat there with arms crossed, unmoved. All of their eyes pinned on the juicy, wonderful slice on the plate ,shining with lights of desire . At that time, a dreadful silence descended on the room.

I suddenly felt I was greedy as I was the only one having fun. Face blushing, I felt the piece in my hand wasn’t that mouth-watering as before. Quite the opposite, my throat tightened as I detected a trace of thirst from my siblings. Glancing up , I met with their longing eyes, which made my heart melt. ”let’s enjoy this together.”head hunging,I gave a tentative invitation, and was greeted with thunderous ‘woo-hoo’ from them. In no time, families sat around the table. Sweet smell wafting in the air, laughter dissolved into the whole room, which was permeated with the scent of sharing. Possible version 2:

The four of them stood together around the picnic table, watching me I ate my second piece. My hands felt sticky. My belly started to feel full, but I just couldn't stop. I bit into my third piece, the little pile of black seeds on my plate growing higher. Five and a half more pieces to go. Red juice dribbled from my chin to my shirt. I glanced up at my family. My sister's mouth was watering. My brother's eyes were locked on the biggest slice left. My parents were watching me in amazement.

I suddenly felt I was greedy as I was the only one having fun. Upon realizing this, my joy immediately gave way to embarrassment. \"Go ahead,\" I invited in a faint murmur, \"have a piece.\" Mom smiled. I guessed she knew all along that l' d share. For a second, they hesitated, eyes wide open in disbelief.

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Then, they stormed to the picnic table, each grabbing a piece of giant, juicy, wonderful watermelon. Now my whole family had watermelon-red chins, sticky hands, and black seeds piled in front of us. Everyone was tickled pink. I realized the only thing better than eating one by myself was sharing it! 【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者自己存钱买了大西瓜,却不愿意与家人分享的故事。

【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

由第一段首句内容“他们四个人一起站在野餐桌旁,看着我。”可知,第一段可描写作者作者独自吃西瓜以及家人的反应。

由第二段首句内容“我突然觉得我很贪婪,因为我是唯一过得愉快的人。”可知,第二段可描写作者邀请家人一起吃西瓜,一家人其热融融。

2.续写线索:独自吃西瓜——家人的反应——请家人吃西瓜——一家人吃西瓜——高兴的场面 3

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I couldn't believe that my father shouted at me and called me a fool! In all my 18 years, I'd never heard him say anything like that to anyone. But then, I had never shouted the words \"I hate you!\" in his face, either. I guess we were both pretty angry. I had been saving money from my part-time job for three years and now I wanted to use it to buy a car. He wanted me to save it for college expenses.

I knew that we both needed time to cool off. I left him sitting at the kitchen table, ran down the stairs to the driveway, and jumped on my bike. I headed for the road that runs along the river. It's usually pretty quiet there and I've found that it's a good place to go to when l need to think something out. Riding along, I kept thinking over and over, \"But it's my money! I earned it!\" Little by little, I calmed down. Circling back toward town later, I stopped in the park. I had a drink of water and decided to avoid Dad for the rest of the day.

He must have had the same idea—about avoiding me, that is. He didn't come up to my room to say goodnight, and I didn't go downstairs. I couldn't get to sleep that night. I kept going over our argument in my mind. He felt I didn't really need a car. After all, I could use his anytime I wanted to. In addition, he paid for my driver's insurance and bought all the gas. It's just that all my friends were buying their own cars and I wanted one of my own. I really wanted that car. I finally fell asleep and when I woke up I didn't really change my mind. But I felt a little better. 注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式作答。

I guess Dad was feeling a little better, too.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a moment, I was able to speak.

【范文背诵】

I guess Dad was feeling a little better too. I went down to breakfast late, but as soon as I walked into the

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kitchen he smiled at me. \"I've been thinking,\" he said. \"Maybe you're right. You did earn the money and what I want more than anything is for you to be happy and to learn to be independent. Maybe you should buy the car if it makes you happy.\" Suddenly, I didn't know what to say.

After a moment, І was able to speak. I said, \"I do want a car, but maybe I don't need one right now. You always let me use yours and that money would come in really handy when I start college. And I'm really sorry about what I said yesterday.\" \"I'm sorry for what I said, too, he said. At that moment, I knew that my father only wanted the best for me and that I could always trust him, even when I disagreed with him!

【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和父亲因为如何使用作者兼职赚来的一笔钱而发生分歧,作者想要买一辆车,而父亲想让他把钱存起来上大学,作者很生气,最后睡着了,醒来以后,虽然没有改变主意,但是感觉好多了的故事。 【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

由第一段首句内容“我想爸爸也感觉好多了。”可知,第一段可描写爸爸改变了主意,同意作者买辆车,作者很吃惊。

由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿,我能够说话了。”可知,第二段可描写作者道歉,并认可了爸爸的想法以及作者的感想。

2.续写线索:爸爸改变主意——爸爸想让作者快乐——作者的想法——道歉——感悟 4

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I was sitting at my kitchen table the other day with a pen, a notebook, a calculator, and a pile of bills, I was doing my monthly budget(预算). There were bills for electric, water, rent, insurance, the car payment, the phone bill, and the WiFi bill. Plus money needed to be set aside for food, gas, clothes, and hopefully a little left over to save for those unexpected bills that always seemed to show up. When I was done I shook my head, closed my eyes, and thought of a time long ago when I would regularly get treasures.

When I was a boy, we lived across the road from Camp Caesar. It held week long camps all through the Summer and my grandma who I lovingly called “Nanny” worked in its big kitchen. I remember sneaking(溜进) in there getting a smile, a hug, a kiss, and a hot cookie from Nanny. Then she would always dig deep in her pockets and pull out a treasure, a shiny coin. She would give it to me and I would run down the hill to either get an ice cold can of coke from the pop machine or I would head to the camp’s swimming pool where I could buy a warm cup of cherry coke for 15 cents and a tiny 10 cent bag of chips from the stand. I took my time because it was always a big decision. It was nice to feel so rich for a few minutes.

Looking back now I can see that the real treasure wasn't the coin at all. It was the love with which Nanny gave it to me. I would have still visited her at work every day if I had never gotten a single coin. It was her smile, hugs, and kisses that were priceless in my heart then and now. 注意:

1. 续写词数应为150左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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Then I posted my grandmother’s story online.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It was suggested that we should write a book about these stories.

【范文背诵】

Then I posted my grandmother’s story online. Many people responded positively. My grandma’s story brought back memories of their happy childhood. Some shared stories of their loved ones and memories of them. We were discussing how we could remember the love forever. People put forward many ways to pass on the love of older generations, such as giving more love to our children, telling them the stories of our relatives and so on. In this way, we can make the world into a big family full of love.

It was suggested that we should write a book about these stories. I was quite in favor of this approach. They proposed that I put together the stories. I took great pride in accepting the suggestion. We selected 100 touching stories and then we wrote articles about them. When we finished our texts, we posted them online for discussion and suggestions. Later we made further improvement on them. Eventually, the publisher published the book for us and it became a best seller. 【文章大意】这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。文章主要讲述了作者在做预算的时候想起了自己的祖母,回忆了和祖母相处的时光以及祖母对作者深深的爱。作者将对祖母的回忆发贴到网上,得到了积极的跟帖,引起了积极的反应和讨论,于是有人建议要把与家人之间“爱”的故事编辑成书,出版发表。

【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“Then I posted my grandmother’s story online.(然后我把我祖母的故事贴到了网上。)”可知,第一段可描写作者将故事发帖到网上后得到的回复,大家反应很积极,故事引起了许多人的回忆和关于如何能永远记住这种爱的讨论。

②由第二段首句内容“It was suggested that we should write a book about these stories.(有人建议我们应该写一本关于这些故事的书。)”可知,第二段可描写作者和其他人一起将故事整理编辑,讨论修改,最终出版了书籍。

2.续写线索:引发积极的回帖——讨论如何铭记“爱”——出版书籍的想法——整理选择并编辑故事——讨论修改——出版书籍成功 5

请阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Sometimes I really doubt whether there is love between my parents. Every day they are very busy trying to earn money in order to pay the high tuition for my brother and me. They don't act in the romantic ways that I read in books or I see on TV. In their opinion, “I love you” is too luxurious for them to say. Sending flowers to each other on Valentine's Day is even more out of the question. Finally, my father has a bad temper. When he's very tired from the hard work, it is easy for him to lose his temper. One day my mother was sewing a quilt. I silently sat down beside her and looked at her.

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“Mom, I have a question to ask you,”I said after a while. “What?” she replied, still doing her work.

“Is there love between you and dad?” I asked her in a very low voice.

My mother stopped her work and raised her head with surprise in her eyes. She did not answer immediately. Then she bowed her head and continued to sew the quilt.

I was very worried because I thought I had hurt her. I was in a great embarrassment and I did not know what I should do. But at last I heard my mother say the following words.

“Susan,” she said thoughtfully, “Look at these thread. Sometimes it appears but most of it disappears in the quilt. The thread really makes them quite strong and durable (持久的)。If life is a quilt, then love should be a thread. It can hardly be seen anywhere or anytime, but it's really there. Love is inside. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.开头已给出。 Paragraph 1:

I listened carefully but I couldn't understand her until the next spring when my father suddenly got sick seriously.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: The doctor had said my father would recover in two months.

【范文背诵】

I listened carefully but I couldn't understand her until the next spring when my father suddenly got sick seriously. After they were back from the hospital, my mother helped him walk slowly on the beautiful country road every morning. My father had never been so gentle. Every day my mother helped my father do exercises in the yard. We all wished our father a speedy recovery

The doctor had said my father would recover in two months. But after two months he still couldn’t walk by himself. All of us were worried about him. “Dad, how are you feeling now?” I asked him one day.“Susan, don’t worry about me, ”he said gently. “To tell you the truth, I just like walking with your mom. ”Reading his eyes, I knew he loved my mother deeply. From this experience, I understand that love is just a thread in the quilt of our life. Love is inside, making life strong and warm.

【文章大意】这篇短文以人物为线索展开。讲述了作者怀疑自己的父母之间是否有爱存在,因为他们之间从来没有浪漫的举动,没有鲜花和礼物。但是他父亲生病之后,父母的表现让他知道了,爱是在内心里面的,就想做被子的线一样,让被子更结实更温暖。 【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“我仔细地听着,但我不能理解她的话,直到第二年春天,我父亲突然患了重病。”可知,第一段可描写父亲在母亲的陪伴下,有望早日康复。

②由第二段首句内容“医生说父亲将在两个月后康复。”可知,第二段可描写父亲的病情没有太多的好转,但作者从中了解到父母的真爱,感悟到爱的真谛。

2.续写线索:陪走路——帮助——病情没有好转——父母的真爱——感悟

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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Lorena parted the curtain in her living room and looked out onto the wet street She was relieved the sunlight appeared. If it didn’t stop raining it would ruin her day. Her mother had promised to drive her to Fashion Fair if it were sunny. Lorena was desperate to go there because she had to replace a jacket. Earlier that Wednesday afternoon, Eddie, the most popular seventh-grader, had given Lorena his jacket and asked her to keep an eye as he would play basketball in a hurry. Lorena was quite happy to be of help. .

During her last class, the biology teacher made them cut apart dead frogs. For fear of getting blood on Eddied jacket, Lorena folded it and placed it on a chair. Then she took the knife and cut the skin quickly. She felt sick opening the frog’s belly.

When the bell rang Lorena hurried out because the bus she caught for home left ten minutes after school. She raced to board the bus and found a seat. After a few minutes the driver started the engine and drove away when Lorena looked out of the window and saw Eddie. “The jacket!” she screamed. She shot from her seat and ran up to the driver. “You’ve got to stop! I forgot Eddie’s jacket!” “Who’s Eddie? I don’t know no Eddie,” the driver said crossly. “Sit down.”

All that evening she was upset and blamed her biology teacher for her problem. If he hadn’t made them dissect (解剖) frogs, she wouldn’t have been so absent-minded. The next day Lorena rushed from the bus to the biology room. The jacket was not there!

“How can I ever tell Eddie?” she closed her eyes. She spent most of her break and lunch period in the rest room, brushing her hair and worrying. On Friday she stayed home to avoid Eddie. She told her mother she wanted to go shopping to buy her a gift for her birthday, which was the next week. Actually, she wanted to buy a jacket with her life savings at Fashion Fair. 注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2续写部分分为两段每段的开头语已为你写好; Paragraph 1:

Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left, asking her not to waste money.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:

Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his jacket.

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【范文背诵】

Mom drove Lorena to Fashion Fair and left, asking her not to waste money. Lorena promised and ran in. Stopping at a rack of Nike jackets, she wondered what size Eddie wore. She tried one on and found the sleeves coming down over her hands. She felt it must be the size.She walked to the cash register and

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paid the money. She was overjoyed to have settled the problem. Then she headed for the perfume department to buy a gift for Mom. It was too bad she didn't have enough money!

Lorena was about to leave when she saw Eddie in his jacket. With a tight face, Eddie scolded Lorena why she had left his jacket in the biology room. \"I thought we could be friends,\" he complained. \"I can explain,\" Lorena begged. \"You're of no help at all!\" Eddie rushed off. \"What the hell's going on?\" Lorena wondered. Realizing some people could never be friends, she wiped her eyes, returned the jacket, bought Mom some cheese instead of the romantic perfume and went home.

【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开,故事讲述了Lorena答应了Eddie给他照看他的夹克,却因为生物课上心不在焉而错以为把Eddie的夹克丢了。她不得不花费自己全部积蓄给Eddie买夹克准备还他,结果提前把夹克从教室拿走的Eddie却不分青红皂白责备Lorena没看管好夹克,后来Lorena得出结论:有些朋友是交不了的。 【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“妈妈开车带着Lorena去了时装展,然后离开了,告诉她不要乱花钱。”可知,第一段可描写Lorena不得不花光自己的钱给Eddie买夹克来还他。

②由第二段首句内容“正当Lorena准备离开时,她看见Eddie穿着他的夹克。”可知,第二段可描写不问青红皂白的Eddie指责Lorena没有看管好自己的夹克,因此Lorena不再把Eddie当朋友。 2.续写线索:妈妈开车送Lorena去时装展——买夹克准备还给Eddie——夹克没丢却迎来指责——退还夹克——感悟 7

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

John was waiting for the girl whose heart he knew, but whose face he didn’t. Thirteen months ago, in a Florida library he took a book randomly off the shelf and took great interest in the notes in the margin (页边空白). The further he read, the more intrigued (着迷) he was by the notes. The soft handwriting reflected a thoughtful soul and insightful and profound mind. John couldn’t help picturing in his mind what kind of people the owner would be.

In front of the book, he discovered the previous owner’s name, Miss Hollis Maynell. With extreme delight, he couldn’t contain his curiosity and spared a lot of time and effort to locate her address. Eventually and fortunately, all the efforts paid off, He wrote her a letter without any hesitation introducing himself and inviting her to respond.

During the following years the two grew to know each other through the mail, exchanging ideas covering all aspects ranging from classic works to current events, which brightened each other’s life handsomely. John once requested a photograph, but she refused. She felt that if he really cared, it wouldn’t matter what she looked like. Later they scheduled their first meeting--7: 00 pm at Grand Central Station in New York. “You’ll recognize me,” she wrote, “by the red rose I’ll be wearing on my lapel (翻领).” So at 7: 00 he was in the station looking for the girl with the red rose.

A girl in a green suit was coming toward him, and she has black hair pulled tightly into a knot at the back of her head, her figure long and slim and her eyes amazingly charming blue, which quickened his heartbeat. Almost uncontrollably he made one step closer to her, with a strong voice yelling at the

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bottom of his heart but didn’t spot the red rose on her lapel. It was just at this moment that he saw Hollis Maynell---a woman well past 40, with a bright-colored rose on her coat. The girl was walking quickly away.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分成两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:

He felt as though he split (裂开) in two,

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Paragraph 2

The woman smiled, “I don’t know what this is about, son,”

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【范文背诵】

He felt as though he split (裂开) in two, so keen was his desire to follow the girl, and yet so deep was his longing for the woman whose spirit had truly been in the company with him and upheld his own. However, without a long hesitation, he squared his shoulders and said to the woman, “I'm John, and you must be Miss Maynell. I am so glad you could meet me! May I take you to dinner?

The woman smiled, “I don’t know what this is about, son,” she answered softly, “but the young lady in the green suit begged me to wear this rose on my coat. And she said if you were to ask me out to dinner, I should tell you that she is waiting for you in the restaurant across the street. She said it was some kind of test!” with his heart nearly brimful of wild delight, he straightened his back and headed directly to the restaurant.

【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了男主人公约翰在图书馆的一本书上发现一位女生空白处的注释,对其产生了兴趣,通过努力获得其联系地址后与其进行了几年的通信。两个人约定见面之时,女孩给了约翰一点小小的考验,约翰通过了考验。这也告诉我们一个道理:心灵的本质是从其对不美的事物的态度中反映出来的。 【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

①.由第一段首句内容“他觉得自己好像被分裂成了两半。”可知,第一段可描写约翰的内心挣扎,最后还是鼓起勇气邀请了那位女士。

②由第二段首句内容“女士笑了笑,轻声回答说:“孩子,我不知道这是怎么回事,””可知,第二段可描写那位女士告诉了约翰真相,约翰欢喜地向餐厅奔去。 2.续写线索:内心挣扎——邀请女士——女士告信——奔向餐厅

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave.

The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh, yes…but I don’t have money on me,” she replied.

“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.”

The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.

“What is it?” asked the man kindly.

“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”

Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”

Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered Mother’s familiar face and weathered(沧桑的) hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”

On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. 注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2续写部分分为两段每段的开头语已为你写好; Paragraph 1:

Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.

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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.

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【范文背诵】

Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she knocked at the door, she found the door was locked and her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house. “Where could my mother be?” she wondered. “Was she still angry with me?” Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from

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her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks.

A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother. “Here you come! I’ve been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldn’t help throwing herself into her mother’s arms. “Mum, I’m so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently.

【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个充满教育意义的故事。Jenny因和母亲争吵而负气离家,在街上得到陌生的面店老板赠予的面条而心生感激,在面店老板的提醒下,她终于认识到了母亲的伟大。 【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“Jenny走到门口,深深地吸了一口气。”可知,第一段可描写Jenny到家门口后的情景,以及她的所思所想。

②由第二段首句内容“一个在她头发上的温柔的抚摸拉回了她的思绪”可知,本段可描写她意识到自己的错误,给妈妈道歉,并表示感激。

2.续写线索:门口犹豫——母亲迎接Jenny回家——陷入沉思——Jenny道歉——母女和好 9

It was my tenth birthday and I would have the biggest party ever. The guest list, which I kept at the back of my homework assignment folder, began with a few close friends. But in the two weeks before that special Friday night, it had quickly grown from seven girls to a total of seventeen. Nearly every girl in my fifth grade class had been invited to sleep over at my house for a big celebration. I was especially happy when each guest I invited excitedly accepted the invitation. It would be a night of scary stories, pizza and lots of presents. But as I later realized, I would truly treasure only one gift I received that night.

The family room was a flurry of shouts and bursts of laughter. We had just finished a game of Twister and were lining up for the limbo when the doorbell rang. I hardly paid attention to who might be at the door. What did it matter, really? Everyone I liked from school was there, in my family room, preparing to lean under the stick held by my two sisters.

“Judy, come here for a minute,” Mom called from the front door.

I rolled my eyes and shrugged to my friends as if to say, “Now who would dare bother me at a time like this?” What I really wanted to say was: It's tough being popular!

I rounded the bend toward the front door, then stopped. I knew my mouth dropped open and I could feel my face turning red, for there on the front porch stood Sarah Westley-the quiet girl who sat next to me in music class and she was holding a gift.

I thought about the growing list in the back of my assignment folder. How had I forgotten to invite Sarah?

I remembered that I only added a name to the list when someone had shown an interest in me. But Sarah had never done that. Never once had she asked me about my birthday party. Never once did she squeeze into the circle of kids surrounding me at lunch time. And once she even helped me carry my backpack while I dragged my science project to our third floor classroom.

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注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

I guess I had forgotten to invite her simply because she wasn’t pushing to be invited.

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I stood there with Sarah’s gift in my hands and an empty feeling in my heart.

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【范文背诵】

I guess I had forgotten to invite her simply because she wasn’t pushing to be invited. But now she unexpectedly appeared in front of me, and said to me with a smile: Happy birthday to you. Then she handed me a gift. I was surprised by her appearance, and I was embarrassed because I didn’t invite her, but I was still happy to accept her blessings and gift. To make up for my negligence, I hurriedly said to her: “Come in and play with us.” But Sarah hesitated and said to me, “Sorry, I can’t stay and spend this wonderful evening with you. She explained to me that her brother was ill and she had to go to the drugstore to buy medicine for him. Then she gave me a hug and left.

I stood there with Sarah’s gift in my hands and an empty feeling in my heart. Before I could open the present, I heard someone calling out to me in the living room. So I put the gift on the cupboard and went to entertain the guests, I didn’t open the present until the party was over. There was a handwritten greeting card and a pair of gloves knitted by Sarah herself in the box. Sarah wrote in her card that winter was coming and she hoped the gloves would bring warmth to me. I was so moved and ashamed. It was at that moment that I realized that although I often ignored her, she would always hold out her hand whenever I needed her. This is a true friendship that I will treasure for the rest of my life. 【文章大意】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在10岁盛大生日派对上没有邀请安静的同学Sarah,但是在生日派对当天,同学Sarah赶来送了亲手编制的手套,这让作者回忆起以前接受到Sarah的种种帮助,作者意识到这才是余生要珍惜的友谊。 【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“我想我忘了邀请她,只是因为她不想被邀请。”可知,第一段可描写作者同学Sarah意外出现在作者生日派对。

②由第二段首句内容“‘我手里拿着Sarah的礼物站在那里,心里感到一片空虚。”可知,第二段可描写Sarah的友谊让作者感动。

2.续写线索:即将迎接生日派对——列客人名单——派对狂欢——同学Sarah的意外到来——作者感动——珍惜和Sarah成为朋友 10

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Ronny and Henry were two friends in the same class. They always played together and went home

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together. One day as Ronny and Henry were going home after school, they saw some students with the same school uniform fighting in the street corner. Ronny said excitedly, \" Some people are fighting! Let's go and have a look! But Henry refused, \"I don't think so. It's dangerous. We'd better tell our teachers, who have rich experience to solve this kind of things. Besides, our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't want them to worry about me.\"

“You are a coward, and afraid to go,” said Ronny, and off he ran to the spot with some other boys. Henry sighed, deciding to inform his teachers what happened. So now, the boys had different opinions about the definition of “bravery” . But what kind of things can be considered to be brave?

After that, Ronny thought Henry was a coward and told all the boys that. They laughed at him a great deal. From then on, they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him.

Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Ronny for his rude behaviour , because he had learned that true courage was shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved, and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong. Thus, he just ignored the other boys’ laughter and continued to stick to his thought and go to school and study as well. However, Ronny didn't invite Henry to go home with him anymore. Instead, he had his new friends who also thought Henry was a coward. Every day after school, they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had lots of fun. 注意:

1. 续写词数应为150左石;

2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1:

A few days later, something terrible happened to Ronny.

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【范文背诵】

A few days later , something terrible happened to Ronny. Ronny, together with his new friends, was playing some games as usual after school. Someone suggested having a competition to see who could catch crabs most on the riverbank. In order to win the first place to show his bravery, walking alone, Ronny was so careless as to slip and fall into the river. Frightened, the other boys gathered around , shouting for help, but none had the true courage to help Ronny .

At that moment, Henry happened to pass by. He noticed a crowd standing along the river, hearing cries for help.What a familiar voice! Without hesitation, he jumped into the river, trying to help the drowning friend. Tough job as it was, Henry succeeded in seizing Ronny and pulling him back to the bank. All the surrounding people gave him admiring cheers .With the help of some other lookers-on, Ronny came to himself. Ronny lowered his head and kept silent, holding Henry's hands tightly. Then, Ronny looked into Henry's eyes, and said in a firm voice,\" You are not a coward at all but a hero! Please forgive my rude behaviour, my best friend !” What he got was a warm embrace .

【文章大意】本文是记叙文,讲述一对好朋友Ronny和Henry因为对“勇敢”的理解不同而渐行渐远。有一次Ronny意外落水,被挺身而出的Henry救起,这让Ronny明白了什么才时真正的“勇敢”,

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两人重新成为了好朋友。 【写作提示】 1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“几天后,一件可怕的事情发生在罗尼身上。”可知,第一段可描写罗尼遇险以及其它小伙伴的反应。

②由第二段首句内容“这时,亨利碰巧经过。”可知,第二段可描写亨利挺身而出,勇敢地救助了罗尼,让罗尼知道了什么才是真正的勇敢。

2.续写线索:河边游戏——罗尼落水——无人援救——亨利援手——好友得救——罗尼心声

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