写作提分特训(三)
第一组
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是高三(1)班班长李华。近期你校学生会将组织“跳蚤市场爱心义卖(flea market for charity)”活动。请代表你班给校学生会主席王越写一封邮件,申请参加本次活动,内容包括:
1.申请一个摊位(booth); 2.简要描述义卖的物品; 3.就善款的用途提出建议。 注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 One possible version: Dear Wang Yue,
I’m Li Hua,monitor of Class 1,Grade 3.I’m writing to apply for a booth in the flea market for charity.We’ve prepared a wide range of goods that appeal to students with
different
needs,including
reference
books,inviting
snacks
and
beautifully-potted plants.We suggest the money we get be donated to poor children in mountainous areas,helping them receive a good education.
We’d appreciate it if we could participate in this meaningful activity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then,and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. I knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home,and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus!” She shouted. “Ridiculous!Don’t believe it.” That rumor has been going around for years,and it makes me mad,plain mad.
“Now,put on your coat,and let’s go.”
“Go where,Grandma?” I asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby’s General Store,the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors,Grandma handed me ten dollars. “Take this money,” she said,“and buy something for someone who needs it. I’ll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby’s.
I was only eight years old. I’d often gone shopping with my mother,but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded,full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there,confused,holding that ten-dollar bill,wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker,who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs.Pollock’s grade-two class. Bobby Decker didn’t have a coat. I knew that because he never went out for recess(课间休息) during the winter. His mother always wrote a note,telling the teacher that he had a cough,but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn’t have a cough,and he didn’t have a coat. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one,which looked really warm,and he would like that.
“Is this a Christmas present for someone?” the lady behind the counter asked kindly,as I laid my ten dollars down. “Yes.”
The nice lady smiled at me,put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas. 注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:
That evening,Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
Paragraph 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it
One possible version:
That evening,Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby,From Santa Claus” on it,after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker’s house,explaining I was officially one of Santa’s helpers. Grandma parked down the street from Bobby’s house,and I took a deep breath,and dashed for his front door. Seeing no other people notice us,I put the Christmas present down,pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker’s front door to open and finally it opened. Out went Bobby Decker. Seeing the coat in the bag,he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out. After hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus,I felt very proud of what I had done. At that time I decided to be Santa’s helper for ever. It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.
第二组
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李明。你所在的班级将举行毕业告别派对 (graduation farewell party),请你给外教Mr.Robinson写一封邀请信,内容包括:
1.时间:周日下午5点; 2.地点:学校餐厅;
3.活动安排:享用晚餐,观看演出,分享美好回忆等等。 注意:
1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节。
One possible version: Dear Mr.Robinson,
I am writing to invite you to attend our graduation farewell party,which will be held at the school canteen at 5 p.m.this Sunday.During the party,we will enjoy dinner,play games and appreciate performances together.Then there will come the most important part of the party:sharing the unforgettable moments in the past three years.
We would be greatly honored by your presence.If you accept our sincere invitation,please inform us at your earliest convenience,enabling us to make some necessary preparations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
第二节 概要写作(满分25分)
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Many Chinese students have studied English for approximately ten years,but most of them cannot even speak English correctly or fluently.In my opinion,there are several obstacles that have caused this to happen.The main obstacle is fear!Another is the habit of mentally translating from Chinese to English and then to change these thoughts into spoken words and sentences.Many of these difficulties are caused by the way Chinese people study and learn the language.
We must learn to speak as a child does.When we are learning a second language we need to remember how we learned our native language.Learning to understand and speak a language is one of the first skills a child develops.How does a child learn the language?He listens for a time and then he tries to repeat the words.Parents give great praise for the smallest effort and slightest improvement.Therefore,the child develops courage and is excited about learning.It takes a long time before he knows anything about grammar,spelling or formal sentence structures.
As for language teachers,they should avoid criticism and be very encouraging and generous with praise.Criticism or pointing out faults too often causes students to lose self-confidence and develop a fear of speaking.The best way to motivate a student is using praise.
The most important aspect of speaking is having good self-esteem.Self-esteem is how you feel about yourself.When most Chinese people are asked how their English is,or they are told their English is very good,they immediately respond by saying,“Oh my English is very poor.”If you say this to yourself often enough,you will believe it.When someone compliments (称赞) you,just say “thank you”.
One possible version:
Caused by their fear and way of learning,many Chinese students cannot speak English fluently even after ten-years’ learning.(要点1)Actually we should learn to speak English as a child learns his native language by listening and repeating a lot.(要点2)And teachers should praise and encourage rather than criticize students,just as parents do.(要点3)Finally,having good self-esteem is of vital importance in speaking English.(要点4)
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