英语中考英语书面表达训练1

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1． 亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。 要点 历史文化 文明行为 身边文明 内容 历史悠久，文化各异；传统节日，多彩习俗（举一例） 相互尊重，以礼相待；互学共鉴，共同成长（或自拟） 校园文明（自拟一点） 注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇: civilized 文明的 Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon. All the best, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.

China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best.

Li Hua

【解析】 【分析】

本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。 【详解】

文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。 【点睛】

写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。

2． 书面表达

暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。

Parents' opinions Get ready for high school. Do some housework… Kid's opinions Have a good rest. Do some sightseeing… Your opinion … 注意]

（1）表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥; （2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;

（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息; （4）词数:不少于80。

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.

Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.

In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系． 【点睛】

这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

3．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组 的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一 份素质报告． Name Characteristics Hobbies Honour Problems Your suggestions Tommy 聪明、大方（各举一例） 喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举 2 个好处） 他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举 一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student） 面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠． （根据实际情况提 2 点建议）… 要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当

发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.

【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest. 【解析】

这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

4．书面表达

根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（lucky money）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？请结合自己的实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下： 1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途；

2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议（至少 3 点）；

3. 呼吁大家节约用钱，把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。

【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.

In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others

makes us happy.

All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way. 【解析】 【详解】

每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（luckymoney）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容表达出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。 【点睛】

文章使用了很好的短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。

5．写作

81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参加各种户外活动。为了倡导中学生接近大自然，某中学生英文报举办了一次征文活动，请你根据以下问题，用英语写一篇短文参加征文。 提示：1）What’s the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions） 2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examples） 3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.

【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.

When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.

There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.

Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends. 【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词（组）的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：It is +形容词+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。

6． 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。 提示词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare

提示问题： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? ● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? ● What is your advice for Jack?

Dear Jack,

I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday . . Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,

I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.

The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:

First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.

Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.

What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.

If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】 【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。 3.高分亮点：

短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。 句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。

7．假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。

提示词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink 提示问题： ●When and where are you going to meet? ●What are you going to do there?

●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit? Dear Pete, How is it going?

I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in

Yanqing.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua

【答案】 Dear Peter， How is it going?

I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.

I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】

1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。

2. 例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点：

短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。 句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。

8．写作

某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点: 1. Who was the person you made happy? 2. When was it? 3. What did you say or do? 4. Why did it make him/her happy? 5. How did you feel at that moment?

注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。 2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。

【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.

In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.

【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。

写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。

9．书面表达

初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。 活动 时间 地点 参与者 活动内容 毕业晚会 6月28日晚上七点 学校礼堂school hall 全体初三学生和老师 1. 邀请校长作演讲； 2. 互赠礼物送祝福； 3. 各班表演精彩节目 4. 要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。 3.80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。 Dear editor,

I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,

Yours Lihua 【答案】Dear editor,

I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.

This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan. Best wishes, Yours, Li hua 【解析】 【分析】

这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。 【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

10．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信： 1.作者：孟郊 2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题：母爱的伟大 注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.

Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇材料作文。 【详解】

根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分：

第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。 1.作者：孟郊 2.时间：唐朝

3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题：母爱的伟大

第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来信。

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