【2019年全国Ⅱ卷】 第四部分 写作
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
【2018年全国Ⅱ卷】
When I was little, Friday's night was our family game night. After
supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn't realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
【2017年全国Ⅱ卷】
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!
【2016年全国Ⅱ卷】
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges
we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
【2015年全国Ⅱ卷】
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
【2014年全国Ⅱ卷】
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and hopefully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
参考答案
【2019年全国Ⅱ卷】
Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do.
jobs
First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then,
cool
when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my
fifth
English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry ∧high school, I
very/so in/at
reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons
and There
for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person
amazed
could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I
was
wanted to help people in need.
【2018年全国Ⅱ卷】
When I was little, Friday's night was our family game night. After
Friday
supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the
sorts a
kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to
watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that watch me playing card games would help my brain. Still I ∧unwilling to play the
was
games for them sometimes. I didn't realize how right my parents are until with were I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a
when
child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
【2017年全国Ⅱ卷】
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the
both
school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.
an
In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their
interested
garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and
which early
water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening
tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. Besides information
When summer came, they will invite their students ∧pick the fresh
comes to
vegetables!
【2016年全国Ⅱ卷】
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking
about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at what choose
home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no
taking and
need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about ∧world.
the
If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges
our knowledge
we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places
或改为should
of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many,
think much
yet we can still learn a lot.
【2015年全国Ⅱ卷】
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was
parents
very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very
in
much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for
looking
some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.
that 或者删除where
Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling
began told
him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw ∧parents. Mom
the his
said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony
terribly
promised her that this would never happen again.
【2014年全国Ⅱ卷】
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are
There
three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to
don’t
do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school
much for
activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and
hours
play sport for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the
looks
flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass
for a rest, sat by the lake listening∧ music. The teachers here are kind
sit to
and hopefully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. hopeful
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